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| Topic Started: Dec 15 2008, 12:11 AM (35 Views) | |
| Ratbag | Dec 15 2008, 12:11 AM Post #1 |
Corsario Lascanense
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Hace un tiempo comenze a escribir este relato a modo de capitulos, sobre un hombre que encuentra un diario bastante arruinado por el tiempo, en latin, y comienza a transcribirlo para darse cuenta de que el diario no le pertenecia a alguien normal... Ayer le hice unos retoques y ya estoy listo para revelar la introduccion y la transcripcion del primer capitulo, Esta enteramente en Ingles escrito por mi, no esta totalmente revisada la ortografia pero pienso que no tienen errores importantes, tambien sera posteado en mi blog por entradas, ya postie la intro y el primer cap ahi. El "autor" de la transcripcion para comunicar algo usualmente lo dira en notas o al pie de pagina, y dara su resumen de su trabajo y lo que va pasando en su vida al mismo tiempo que lo que le va pareciendo la vida del hombre del diario. Espero que les guste n_n ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I was walking in a bit of a rush from work, i had to be in the photostudio before 7 pm, i work as a journalist in the best-yet-crappy newspaper around here. I took out a tiny piece of paper inside my pocket, “turn left on Maine, then right on Jackson St.”, even tough i walked that bloody path a thousand times, i don’t even know how to reach there without that paper…but well, that’s not the case. As i said, i was late and running, i turned left on Maine as the paper said and i was pretty much surprised to see a bluish notebook between some rubbish, i took it, only because of my curiosity…that’s why i’m a journalist after all. It was pretty worn down, the bluish color of the cover was almost gone and the name written with some kind of red pen was unreadable. I decided to put it in my briefcase, “i'll try to read it late at night, while i’m not busy” i Thought. And so, here i present the first part of my work, every night i will try to translate a bit more, and one day, i will reveal the secrets of this cursed diary, written by a tortured soul. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 1 I couldn’t look away, the sight of flesh being ripped apart wast terrifying but at the same time, beautiful. The sight of him screaming in pain, crying but somewhat enjoying, is something i can’t describe, like my eyes couldn’t believe how in such a horrible scene, i was so fascinated. Maybe is what they call, the beauty of the dead? Even if it’s natural, i doubt this feeling is totally human, am i turning into something i really don’t desire to be? I’ll just ha – Unreadable Parts– ..if i’m not discovered, maybe i can find out why i am like this…but I fear, every single day i fear, the truth is… i don’t know what is the source of that fear…but as long as i keep this to myself, i have really nothing to fear…or do i? – The rest is unreadable — “I am still trying to transcribe this diary, soon page 2 will be finished and i’ll be up to page 3, but as i translate this diary i fear of what may happen, but as i work and read i get more and more carried away, i fear that i’m developing quite a fascination…i’ll see if my mental state is solid enough to keep doing this…but i doubt i can stop now…” |
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| Waka | Dec 15 2008, 07:57 AM Post #2 |
Sam Guango
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Me lo lei todo... Ahora esperare a la segunda parte ya que el relato te quedo bastante bien en inglés... Buen vocabulario. Suerte! |
   
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| Kaisha | Dec 15 2008, 09:54 PM Post #3 |
Zombie Soviético
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Esta impresionante ^^ la verdad muy bueno, estare esperando la segunda parte con ansisas Felicitaciones por el trabajo ^^ |
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| Gero94 | Dec 15 2008, 10:11 PM Post #4 |
Zombie Hamster Placenta Eater
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 muy bueno, atrapanteespero la segunda pag. 
Edited by Gero94, Dec 15 2008, 10:12 PM.
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| Ratbag | Dec 16 2008, 11:04 PM Post #5 |
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Corsario Lascanense
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Muchisimas gracias n_n Me quedo contento sabiendo que les gusta, ahora estoy trabajando en la pagina 2 que es bastante mas larga |
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Mario, the toadstools are consuming your life! That's bullshit *keeps eating mushrooms* | |
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